I learn a lot about what not to do by reading other people’s nuzlockes. Like, if my reaction to one of your main characters dying is, “oh thank god” then you probably didn’t write that character very well. ):
If I’m skipping pages at a time because I’m uninterested in reading your gigantic information dump, then that information should probably be exposed to me through the story itself and not eight thousand giant dialogue bubbles.
I can’t believe people still use the gentleman-with-a-tophat archetype. How dare you.